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Reviews for "Madness Ashoffka"

A really good madness toon!

Hope you finish it. And who was the douchebag with the purple hair? Hope he dies EXTRA hard. Nice work i really enjoyed this one. Most madness tributes suck balls

pretty good sir!

I enjoyed this good flash the story plot however doesn't seem to make much sense. Action and blood were good and so was the violence. You sir if you keep this up you are going to be favored by many people.

Awesome.

Really cool, and the sound just made it better. Keep up the good work!

That was really good!

That was really good, it looks like alot of effort went into that.

I think you have a great sense of how to animate this stuff but heres a few nits I can pick to make it more madness like.

-The animation was rushed, I don't know what FPS you used but 32 is what is used for most the sprites and effects that you used.
-Feetwork slows down the rush of the animation so it seems a little more balanced, plus adds more realism and so forth instead of just basically gliding across the screen.
-Better sound effects would have been nice and maybe some vcam zooms and stuff.
-Have the text a little larger, you gave us plenty of time to read it but it was kinda small, maybe add some buttons that pauses the animation, lets you read it, then click a button to continue, but it works with the delay like you had.
-This is my personal believe that every gun needs bullet casings, they are a pain in the ass to make but will create better effects.

Heres a tip on bullet casings.
A good way to easy the hassle of animating them is to make a about 5 movieclips of a shell flying in a different way, that way there is variety and you can just toss in a bunch of them when there is automatic fire and so forth, the more different movieclips you use the better, just be careful to make sure that when they end their animation they stay on the ground or don't float above the ground.

But 10/10 5/5, I would love to see another one.