Horrific
I stopped watching it half way through, it was too creepy.
Overall-
Music 10/10 it fitted perfectly
Idea 10/10 very eerie storyline, a real 'mind-sticker'
Everything else- 11/10- outstanding!
Horrific
I stopped watching it half way through, it was too creepy.
Overall-
Music 10/10 it fitted perfectly
Idea 10/10 very eerie storyline, a real 'mind-sticker'
Everything else- 11/10- outstanding!
its too much
i can barly stand the awsomeness, any more and i might explode....
great
great movie, I was really feeling it.
Could have done a little better on the sound thought.. it was good, but I dunnow sometimes you mixed it with some not too good music:P
keep it up
yeah, i'm clearly not a musician.. plus, it was mixed with audacity. not the best sound editing program in the world.
Darkness?
Although the dark factor was here, it wasn't as dark and depressing as I would've thought. Although the poem was elegant, the presentation through the flash didn't truly captivate me the way I was hoping it would. Your artwork was very nice as well as your animation and sound. Your storyline could've used a little work, although you did your job with embracing the viewer with darkness and creepiness, you didn't do as much as I believe you could've done.
|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Good Story
*Superb Sound
|| Bad Points ||
(none)
good job
good work, if just a bit freaky.