Darkness?
Although the dark factor was here, it wasn't as dark and depressing as I would've thought. Although the poem was elegant, the presentation through the flash didn't truly captivate me the way I was hoping it would. Your artwork was very nice as well as your animation and sound. Your storyline could've used a little work, although you did your job with embracing the viewer with darkness and creepiness, you didn't do as much as I believe you could've done.
|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Good Story
*Superb Sound
|| Bad Points ||
(none)