Wow!
A LOT better thant the first one. But you still have some mistakes on the grammar.
Still, you are doing better and better in every flash you do.
Good job.
Reviews for "Yoki's Story 2"
Cool......
This is great and why does Yoki have a koopa shell? It would be cooler to give him a scar or something else than that. He just looks weird with a koopa shell.
Well I'm excited to see what happens next.
Not bad
The animation is quite nice, the only problem I would have to say is the few grammatical errors that I see here and there in the text, other than that, it's perfect