Don't post attempts.
Practice flashes are ok for yourself or friends to watch at home but posting a test flash is not something you want to do. Make a full animation and post that.
Reviews for "Madness redemption Trailr"
30001 responds:
not really a test flash but w/e. check my other FULL animations, though they did have a few problems. Thanks for the review
Wait whut
A decent try, but I found a few problems. (Besides the abrupt ending)
1- Seriously? You used sprites for your shrapnel? That's just lazy. :/
2- Why did the enemy bodies just disappear after being hit by the sprite explosion-shrapnel stuff? That's not like madness at all.
3- What was up with the grenade? It didn't look very good or grenade-ish at all.
I'd recommend taking a few test runs, to see how the Madness animations look, sound, feel, etc. Then try again.
30001 responds:
Thank you for the constructive review.
here are some things i have to say about what you had to say
1:Spriting is my thing, im no good at drawing them so i dont think the word here is lazy.
2:the sprited explosion thing was acctually something in a point where i Screwed up. i do have to agree that its not really madness like.
3:the grenade was part of a sprite pack that was ripped from Apotheosis so i just have to say w/e to that one (sorry. It DOES look like a grenade but you gotta look closely.i made it glow for effects).
thanks again for the review!