Pretty good work, Tarienn
I do have some concerns though and I have to agree with the others about their constructive criticism about the intro being a little too long. It takes a lot to make me give anyone below a 5/10. I am not preaching to you and yes, some "Christians" go over the line, but I am a true Christian and I believe in freedom to live as you choose. Even I shake my head in wonder when those in my own faith use HF&D tactics. Please do not take this as preaching, but encouragement. Just work on those concerns of the others about the intro being too long and you will get the 10/10 from me on later releases. PS Tell the rest of your crew, good Job!