Finally...
It's good to see the legion produce something that is actually good to watch. Structured well and everything. Subject matter messed me up a little, but hey.
Hpefully some of the other crews will follow the example.
Reviews for "LL - Sofa"
Pretty funny
It was good, I like the concept and the animation was decent... although I couldn't tell whether the characters were just strange shapes or what. One looks like a shotgun shell or maybe some lipstick. The other one looks like jelly candy. The humor itself was good, if lacking a bit in the direction department. Nothing really made sense, and I suspect it could have been funnier given the fact that your plotline isn't bound by the restraints of coherency. Why bother heightening the drama of a crazy store if you're going to deus ex machina your characters out of the predicament?
Also, you should really try to find some voice talent. Listening to electronic voices is novel, but gets old fast. Perhaps if the shotgun shell had looked more like stephen hawking or the jelly-blob more like a robotic homestar runner (what each sounded like, respectively) I could have rolled with it.
Nice job, but try to add a little more polish next time around.
MagicWandLock responds:
Thank you for constructive criticism.