Locktastic
That was kick ass and quite trippy at the same time, Probably the best lock legion flash I've seen from this bi-weekly contest so far
Reviews for "LL - Sofa"
Ahahaha
Awesome man.
Nothing more to say here.
Hot damn!
That animation style of your's is amazing! Bouncy and smooth.
Story was very creative and psychological.
Thanks for the cameo, love you!
Good job!
Pretty funny
It was good, I like the concept and the animation was decent... although I couldn't tell whether the characters were just strange shapes or what. One looks like a shotgun shell or maybe some lipstick. The other one looks like jelly candy. The humor itself was good, if lacking a bit in the direction department. Nothing really made sense, and I suspect it could have been funnier given the fact that your plotline isn't bound by the restraints of coherency. Why bother heightening the drama of a crazy store if you're going to deus ex machina your characters out of the predicament?
Also, you should really try to find some voice talent. Listening to electronic voices is novel, but gets old fast. Perhaps if the shotgun shell had looked more like stephen hawking or the jelly-blob more like a robotic homestar runner (what each sounded like, respectively) I could have rolled with it.
Nice job, but try to add a little more polish next time around.
MagicWandLock responds:
Thank you for constructive criticism.
ROFL
man that was so funny hahaha, ty