Loved it
I liked the interactive menu which had me poke Tails for a while plus I liked the comedy that came with this one episode. However, I didn't like the fact that it wasn't smoother and Sonic's tone kinda stays the same in every situation at least to me.
Good job and hopefully, as the story goes on, it will get better and better.
Impressive!
Not perfect, you still have a few issues, like you still have a few grammatical errors, but it seems your spelling has improved to the point where I can't see any errors in that department, and you still can't seem to match what is being said (verbal) to what is being written. I did like the jokes, though, and Tails seems like a bit of a brat, but I can live with that. For part 1, I give you a 4/5. (Newgrounds vote system, the happy face system is my own, custom, system.)
almost perfect
the close ups are really bad though, but other then that i liked it. the tails thing at the beginning was really cute, "hey don't point that thing at me, it tickles!" <-- awesome
Very little you can do about close ups it is a sprite flash
"good"
i dont think he should have made tails a ***** to sonic...
i watched age of the brotherhood first as i didnt know about this, but this really fills in the gaps.