Nice one!
Haha I liked this man. An interesting style and not badly put together either. Some of the artwork could have used a bit of work but apart from that I thought it was funky.
Reviews for "Organ Donor"
Kyaztro responds:
Thanks man, I was planning on adding a background, but I'm still haven't found a good way to fill in color using the pencil tool, I probably should have used the brush tool, but it always ends up looking sloppy, not that this didn't, just sloppier than usual
Wasn't expecting much.
But briefly after it began playing it became really good, great flash and great concept, wouldn't surprise me if the organ donor foundation starting doing that lol.
I liked how you gave the victim insane strength over the opposing baddies, and super reflexes, it charmed the whole flash. Your drawing style was pretty decent, thus making great animation and movement sequences. Good voicing too.
The only thing I could ask for is add a bit of color besides the blood, don't get me wrong it was great, but I felt a little color was missing, could be the touch up its looking for. The first impression to a flash is extremely important as well, like I said above I wasn't expecting much at first, have your viewers expect alot in the beginning, and keep the quality going throughout the flash.
As sad as it may seem, if that were to actually happen in real life, the only result we would get out of this flash, is the ending scene of the flash, organs gone, guy in desperate help for 911 smearing blood on the wall next to the dumpster. No heroes yet, lol.
Thanks for the great flash, I had fun watching it, truly badass.
8/10 Stars.
4/5 Vote Panel.
xVegetAx, NG Portal Lieutenant.
Kyaztro responds:
Thanks Veget, I really got to take note of adding color
I'm too nice and I hate it
This was an interesting animation, made me laugh at the end. Quite morbid but thats life... or not as the case may be. Black humour win :)
Kyaztro responds:
Good ol' black comedy(and by that I don't mean Tyler Perry comedy)
I was entertained.
I enjoyed this. The animation wasn't anything spectacular, but it didn't have to be. This was a very funny and original concept and it was executed quite well. I love the ending lol. Nice job.
pretty good
organ collector coming to colect a guy's organs when he isn't dead. hahaha. pretty funny. that guy beats the crap out of those guys. then he ends up being dead when it shows you what really happens haha. pretty damn good short