Ahhh, a sound so promising...
...but wait! Where did the sound go!!! The promising sound...GONE!? Correct the sound thing in the end.
Reviews for "Sleep Well"
Good start.
Well, like the others already said, if this really is your first Flash-movie, be very proud of it, it really shows potential!
For the graphics I think you should stick to one style for a piece like this. Meaning, either draw and scan everything, or draw everything with crisp, straight lines in Flash or Illustrator instead of using straight lines for the walls and crude lines for (e.g.) the bed. Maybe that's just personal, but it could be of some advice to you!
nice wee package!!
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ne elyts ay pmark annaw tnod i
dda yrt tub
amard.. msilaer (noot) erom tib
(: !gnidne-"dehcnerd-tweat"-yte ixna erom to gnideal
the music....
it came in way too softly. the panning in scene took way too long, and it almost lost my interest. this movie reminds me a lot of "from my room" ----except with an adult's perspective. i enjoyed this movie tremendously, and i commend you for your excellent job of learning through tutorials. well done, this got a 4.
wow!
you said that you only read the tutorials, was that just the ones in flash 5? good god..i must have read those damn things 1000 times by now, i could read them 1000 more times and still not make something as good as this. I guess flash animating is just like anything else in life, some ppl can just do it and others cant...
still though, really good job.
keep it up and you'll be king of the portal!! ^_^
Dark Warrior