Liked it.....
Great story. nice flowing animation Simple yet good art work. I can tell you took your time with it. Starwars like vibe. Needs better sound affects and some comic relief. Its good stuff.
Reviews for "Exile Preliminary 3"
What!?
Everybody is saying that the picture's aren't that great(Obviously not the best...Cause that's much too hard and would take a long time) and the animations are bad. But they were good(Animation bit slow at times but whatever) the only problem I had watching the video was the audio.
i liked it
it was cool
RiverJordan responds:
I agree, thanks =D
Amazing. So much potential in this flash.
But... sorry Duch. I did have a couple issues with this flash.
First off, there were some anatomical issues. Sometimes the heads looked a bit too large, or you tried to fit body parts into the camera shot that just weren't meant to be there. Also, sometimes a hand would face the wrong way (the thumbs up), or their bodies just seemed to flat. There were also a couple perspective issues, but no really major ones.
However, there were lots of good points about this flash, that outweigh the problems. Your animation skills are amazing, and inspiring. Not so much your art skills, but your animation skills. Your sense of movement and camera shots is fantastic, I love the way you sped along the desert and through the tunnel.
Your camera shots and angles keep the film interesting, and I really like how you use them. Not a single boring camera shot in the whole film :D
And one thing that is so rare with flash nowadays, is marketing. You market your flash, so, fucking, well. Seriously.
Great music, AWESOME intro, simple yet effective credits and an easy to use menu.
Amazing Duchednier, not only have you pulled off a fantastic animation and series to boot, but you've left me wanting more. You ending hooked me, and I can't wait to see the next one in the series, which I'm sure won't disappoint :P
Love your work, brilliant flash, just work on some of the issues I've talked about. I can't wait to see your next addition to the series, you're a bloody inspiration.
<3
RiverJordan responds:
Yeah, a lot of the reviews have been about anatomy, that's why i'm buying a book on poses and stuff and practicing drawing people in my sketchbook more and more :P I'll definetly make Chapter IV much more anatomically correct ^_^
Thanks for the great review!
good ^^
i love the animations but like many have said you can make it so the people are less stiff...but other than that lol the humor you have implemented in the video is good and doesnt take away from the experience nice jo once again