Woah.
I'm not even going to begin to say how incredible that was for a first flash.
Anyway, well done. Nicely animated, and the ending was hilarious.
The only way you could make it better would be to sharpen your graphics.
Woah.
I'm not even going to begin to say how incredible that was for a first flash.
Anyway, well done. Nicely animated, and the ending was hilarious.
The only way you could make it better would be to sharpen your graphics.
tks alot for the comment and time spend in watching my clip. I will try to improve myself in the next clip .
Great!
WOW! Nice job man!
Really cool animation, great graphics and a nice story! I just don't liked the sounds, but they are ok too ^^
Keep working on it! :D
damnit.. this clip is actually meant more for me to try out the timing of my sound effect aplication. Nevertheless, tks alot for the comment. 8 points is really out of my expectation , haha. Too high. I will try to find better sound effects next time. Tks again1
Great Job!
I find it quite interesting and not too shabby. The music can be improved from the transition from the Lu Zhi Zhi training to Du Gu Du Gu training. I find it a bit abrupt. The drawing part of Du Gu Du Gu knocking at the tree I think can be improved. Other than that, I generally find everything quite smooth, especially the fighting scene. A great job for your first flash.
Not bad at all.
Yeah, you're right about it not being super funny, but it was still not too shabby all around. I actually liked the art style a lot. I think you showed a lot of talent. I think sticking around that level of quality would be a good idea if it means being able to come out with stuff quicker. Sure, there are some animations out there that look really professional, but there is like a years wait in between each 3 minute episode. I definitely see a lot of potential. Any helpful advice I could give would be just to touch things up a bit with the sound effects in your next work. The sound was a little. . . messy at times, I guess.
Still, good job on everything.
tks alot for the feedback. I will try my best to improve on various aspect. This is a trial animation for me to practise the timing of the sound effects and able to illustrate what i have in mind. Of coz maintaining this quality doesn\t mean i am able to come up with more clips in a shorter time. Coz in every clips there will be new unforeseen challenges. And I am having a full time day job. Hehe. Nevetheless, appreciate your comments and time viewing the clip.
Critical Hit !!!
Hello There!
Not bad at all! It was pretty funny and I liked the drawings. Maybe the animation could be more fluid and the movie could run a bit faster. Dont let the crowd the time to yawn! You need to blind us all with some lightspeed action.
one lightning speed action clip coming up!! tks for the feedback!