Hmm
A bit too fast, I didn't get enough time to read the signs and getting enough information. Funny thought...
Reviews for "How to be leet."
not bad infact i like it!
this video was really cool and all, but the words came and went a little too fast, but overall, i think this was a really good vid, good job!
Lochie responds:
Thanks.
That was... wierd...
OK, so... mmm... the animation was... ok... the music was mildly funny, but the concept was... pretty bad... it got me just a mild grin on my face, it wasn't hilarious, but it was fun nonetheless...
Clownarific!!!
Funny, but it did not make me laugh out loud. I think it's because it's too short and the content isn't really original. I mean, some of those jokes are ooooolllddd!
Good quality though, so 7 / 10
Lol
Animation/Graphics - Not bad at all. I liked your style of animation and the color that you used for the background fit perfectly for the animation and the audio that you had chosen. I do think that the writing went by way to quickly. I think that's really the only thing that can be improved on this submission at all actually. I think just slow down the scenes a little bit with the text so we can read everything and the rest of the flash looks pretty good fast pace like it is.
Story/Content - It made me laugh, which is always a plus. It's a little short, but thats fine because the flash looks good fast paced. I do think though that when/if you make the text slower that the flash would last a little bit longer helping it out in the length department a little bit. Maybe a couple more examples than the ones that you had, but for the most part it was pretty good here.
Audio - I liked the audio that you used. It worked very well with the color that you used for the background and just for the entire flash in general. I like that there isn't any voices or sound effects just like the old fashion type of films that you were trying to resemble here.
Overall - Just the text slowing down a little bit and this would be a better submission. Good job on getting Frontpage and good job on getting the award.
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