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Reviews for "mario gets pwned"

Not Bad, for a First Flash!

There was quite a few good parts in there, which kept me entertained.

I would suggest making the screen bigger, because I had to put on my glasses on as well to read what the characters were saying. The text went awfully too fast in some areas that I couldn't finish reading them. So that should probably be fixed too, try timing the text to a point where you know that the viewer could have finished reading by then before moving to the next text.

Keep up the good work! ^.-

Good, but needs serious improvement

BIGGER SCREEN SIZE FOR ONE! Sorry, but I had to say that, also, try making the text STICK AROUND LONG ENOUGH FOR PEOPLE TO READ IT! Sorry, but I could not stress those two points enough. Other than that, it was hilarious, the only reason you got a 2 is because of the following:

Small Screen size: -5

Text going by too fast: -3

I gave you the following scores because,

5/5 --> fucking hilarious

2/10 --> explained above.

Tri-Flem responds:

yeah i understand that i made major screw ups that im fixing up when i fix it i will PM u

not very good...

it was certainly original, but you need to make it bigger, give it sound effects, and basically everything else the last 4 people have been saying.

you have a little skill, but it wasnt good to watch regardless. i say go back to the drawing board and literally make something bigger and better than this!

Tri-Flem responds:

........ srry for being a beginner at animations
but i checked ur profile and it says u have not submitted animations.......
so plz if u have not submitted animations dont go around saying that beginners have little skill

Looking good

But I had to put on my glasses to watch it! It's tiny! I'm guessing it's that small because the sprites your using are rather small, but take a look at some of the other sprite-animated content on NG, there are ways to make it look good at higher resolutions. Also, when you change clips the pause isn't really obvious. Give it a nicer looking button with some classy text. But regardless of that, it was funny and no, I haven't seen a Mario blooper short in a while (and I don't particularly want to again =/ ). Your sprite animations were virtually seamless, so if you can get the movie dimensions up there to a normal size, it'll look fantastic.

ehh..

Well make it bigger next time and try to add sound fx If you can.