Cyanide and Happiness artwork meets 'feelings' ...
... is not really a good way to start off. I tried, but was unable to find any story that was entertaining. Maybe it's just a case of bad rhetoric? I mean, your average Newgrounds fan boy isn't much into the neo-expressionist type of sad nonsensicalities that riddle this short, but painful assay of art. They want some sort of action and understandable theme. Maybe even a plot. Sorry, but in my not so weighty opinion, this is barely treading water in the Sea of Blam. As for constructive criticism: try renting some movies in which a plot is divulged without words through the kinetic movement of protagonists or the subtle use of color. Isn't Red Balloon kind of like that?