Get voices of the characters instead of text
Then you will get a 10. Everything else was great just have a voice say dialogue then make fufill all the sense except touch or taste which no animator can do intill they invent food vision.
Reviews for "A day in dead frontier"
lordtac1 responds:
Yeah I understand what your saying.
I didn't want to try voice acting for a few reasons.
the main one being. I don't have the correct hardware or software to record voices well.
2nd being it was my first flash and I didn't wanna tamper with something like that.
Hey, for a sprite movie
It's almost as good as most the others. It doesn't really stand out... but that means it's not a pos, those stand out too.
I'd be willing to watch a part two.
lordtac1 responds:
thank you very much.
after I learn some more about art and design I'll draw the zombies and stuff myself.
WTF!?!
Youd better creat a second half! It just dropped off Im pissed.
lordtac1 responds:
ROFL thats 2 votes for a #2
Dont get me wrong
Dude it was a nice work, but i couldn read that fast and see what was going on at the same time when there were long texts. It was relative funny. Yeah i like it, and the music too. But i didnt get the part where the city was burning. I recommend you doing a second part. Keep working.
lordtac1 responds:
thank you for your admiration.
Yes I'll probly make a #2 if you guys really want me to.
Yeah its hard to get the text timing right when I'm reading it back to myself... I'll do better next time.
Suggestion
The text is kind of awkward, it's difficult to watch the action and read the text while both are occuring.
lordtac1 responds:
This is really an experimental flash I just thought I'd finish it to see how I was doing compared to the other "Newbie" artists