Reviews for A Rhino's Stomach

[stevejavson]

Satisfying

I really liked this film. The animation was fluid and the style was original. The monkey really pissed me off, but of course, you tied up the loose ends quite nicely at the ending leaving me extremely satisfied. Great flash overall.

grabbelfant responds:

Thanks!

[cantflyman]

I very much enjoyed this.

I felt myself start to feel for the rhino, and usually, that means I like the flash. This one's no different. I also got a good kick out of the stomach sub plot. Here's to hoping that you get front page and make more animation in your future.

grabbelfant responds:

Thanks, I hope that I get frontpage also, but I'm not counting on it. Good news for you, I will make more animations in the future (part of my studie)

[dragonslasher]

funny =D

Really enjoyed it great characters, awesome story. Hope to see more from you,
you have really good talent that NG needs.

[RPGsrok]

Unique to say the least

Well you certainly straddled the line there between cute and disgusting a few times, and I don't get the impression you've studied rhino's much, but who cares? I doubt I'll ever see quite the same take on a hungry animal. You had some good animation in there, and the plot was clear and whatnot. I don't really get what the plants with food bait were supposed to be, if anything, but it's a minor issue. It's good stuff. (4/5, 9/10)

As for your supposed sound problems (if you're still worrying about it), I can't say for sure, but if you're getting a message from flash about a sound related error when you export, it's probably a certain sound or frame causing your woe. If you can isolate where it is (delete scenes, parts of scenes, etc until you don't get the error when you export, delete smaller sections over time until you find the cause) you can fix it by changing the sound from event to stream or even by moving it to another layer. I can't guarantee it'll work, but that's my advice. Hope it helps.

[TheManOfH]

very interesting

you have gone with your own original idea. its nice to see something refreshing on newgrounds.

grabbelfant responds:

thanks