Reviews for Alphie's story

[LozzoSAURUS]

hey.... COOOOL!

awsome, i wouldnt have caught on to the story if you hadnt written it in the comments, o.O. but anyway, i reckon that was AWSOME!!!! if you have some spare time in go over the graphics and slow down a couple of the really fast jump-from-one-scene-to-another to jump-from-one-scene-to-another-but-sl ightly -slower-than-before youd get a [b]100[/b] :D
aawsome story, nice ok animation and graphics, but i reckon you wouldnt be able to go much furthur than that with em, and best back ground in history of NG award :D

[Ericho]

Great stuff!

I remember first watching another part of this and was quite impressed. It looks as though you have truly outdone yourself! This is some of the best usage of simple color (without shades) that I have ever seen! All the motions are done wonderfully and I loved how there was an explanation for what went on, as I was confused by 786 years passing. I look forward to seeing the next chapter in this series and hope you get the recognition you deserve. Robots in the future may not seem like that much of an original idea, but it's wonderfully done here!

vezanmatics responds:

OMG thank you so much for this great review! The next chapter of Alphie's story is on its way, and it's probably going to be ten times better than this, I hope. I also hopefully won't have to include a massive explanation, as the next one has more dialogue and the story speaks for itself. Anyway, thanks!

[thedawgs777]

huh...

i say huh because words cannot describe how much i enjoyed this flash, great story and details, awesome artwork, liked the sound track and i actually didnt plan on watching this, i accidentally clicked it instead of some other thing. 10/10 5/5
MAKE ANOTHER OR DIE A SLOW AND PAINFUL DEATH,or just have 1 week of bad luck
=-D

vezanmatics responds:

OH,I WILL >:3
...make another one, that is.
If you liked this one, you'll love the next one. It has alien shanking, a new girl character, and... DIALOGUE!

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NIIIICE

I really enjoyed this you must have put alot of effort into it keep it up!

[Kintaroto]

you certainly know what kind of movies i like

your genre of the story is incredible. i also enjoyed the storyline as well since it relates to post apocolyptic earth. i also like you idea of him becoming cyborgkid. im only giving you a nine because even though it was a great movie, it was a bit fast for me. i couldnt keep up with the whole plot or what he was saying. it was good you're using voices for the animation, but i like more dialogue if you dont mind. i would also like roodi to have some parts to talk as well. anyways, good job.

vezanmatics responds:

The next one I'm submitting is going to have way more dialogue, a fight scene, and the introduction of a girl character as well as several alien races. I recently organized a small team of programmers and voice actors... this next one's gonna be EPIC and hopefully be daily 1st worthy.. unfortunately I'm grounded and can't work on it at all until my grades improve.
At least you liked it, thanks for the nice review! :D