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Reviews for "Rapping"

HOLY SHIT

The begining was amzing (for like beginners) And the walk was lols. The rap was hilarious! We need more submissions from you!

hmm.

It was good, not great, but it needs effort, More effort. More effort! MORE EFFORT!
Something like microphone fiend by R.A.T.M would of been cool, to here some Eee! Eff, eff!
ee see Tee!
More time spent on it, y'know?
... Yeah, you know.

y64 responds:

=D tahnks foh the review, i just lost interest in the idea

Frame by frame is decent

Unfortunately your rapping is aweful. I would stick to improving your animation and drop the rapping. I see some potential with your animating, your rapping on the other hand.... not so much.

y64 responds:

Hahahha i suppose im not going to give up on the rapping tho and the animating yea i kinda lost interest after a while and just rushed a finish

not bad

It was humerous to some degree i thought the intro was cool, maybe you could of kicked some better rhymes an made the animation a bit better, it did make me laugh though.

Ehh

Your intro was pretty cool, kind of better than the rest of it. The actual rapping part was meh, the walk in was alright for a first attempt fbf but it looked a tad awkward and you shouldn't have looped it. Also once he started rapping you just repeated the same mouth movements rather than actually syncing it to the rapping.

Anyway nothing interesting here, a good piece to get practice on but don't expect people to love it.

y64 responds:

Thnks for the review, i lost interest in the idea any way and the rapping part its meh im still learning and i havea cold il improve =D