well
it was really quiet. For a second I didn't think it loaded. But after it did load or well I turned the volume up it had a good mellow beat to it. So great work on this. I would say up the volume on it just a tad bit. But that's just me saying it. Great work.
I'm glad you liked it. This particular piece was done in Finale 2002b (old, right?) and it has its own MIDI sequencer which I wasn't too sure on how to change the volume at the time without changing all the dynamic markings. Still nice as a quiet work, I think; thanks for reviewing!
It's got a medival theme to it.
^^^What I liked^^^
Actually It sounds like something from an NES game. Anyway, It was a nice try. Pretty smooth and basic nothing fancy. You did good.
^^^What needs improvement^^^
Well, I'm not good with suggesting improvement on music but I don't really know. Trying to add more sound into it. (God that sucked).
^^^Overall^^^
A basic medival NES like theme.
Very much your basic MIDI track, like an NES game as you pointed out. If by more sound you mean volume, I can fix that; otherwise I'm afraid I don't know what you mean.
Thanks for the review!
8-bit goes Medevil :P
A nice, quiet loop here. I'm not entirely sure of the exact connotations of a track like this, as it really doesn't wander enough for a dream for my liking. I'd have included a few variations on the theme, as when you start to dream, you mind wanders about until it reaches a comfort zone, so symbolise the thought processes that get you there.
It loops well, but the ending does need to be pepped up a little, as it does tend to give the game away here. If you keep it roughly all the same, you get a better loop, but this does harm the track where I see chance for the variations to kick in. It's a fine line, I know.
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I'm thinking I should change the name now to Example I - Medieval after reading all of these reviews! You're right, not much variation in 57 seconds (monothematic), this was just an idea I was batting around and I put up to entice someone to commision a work.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
Hmmmm
Strange, sounded like a sea type song, but it was a mish mash of alot of things, didn't know which way to go, and it just kinda sounded like noise some of the time. You need to go in a direction and stick with it. But it has some good qualities like the main riff.HAunting but melodic
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Sea-type song, huh? Interesting. When I get some time (motivation) I'll finish this one out, 57 seconds is too short to develop an idea and this wouldn't do well as a loop.
Thanks for the review!
Its ok
This was alright, it reminded me of some of the parts from final fantasy 9, it was good, but a little repteative and also, it was very short, and the shortness of it wasnt a loop unfortunately.
So beef it out a bit if this is gonna be a full song.
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This was my first submission, kinda neat that it reminds you of FFIX. I starte it as a full work, never finished it; so it stayed a sample and here it is. Maybe some day I'll go back and finish it, who knows?
Thanks for reviewing!