not really your strong suit
there a scence like the water part where your drawing style doesn't compliment the actual scene/ camera angle. also with the running scene was quite shoddy as his legs weren't natural. your drawing style didn't lend atall to the theme of horror at all, your more of a fluffy bunny kindof artist although having said that it did work well with the little rag doll. the teddy bear scene could have been abit smoother transition into the hulk bear instead of a jump prehaps. im not going to say i could do any better but its not your strong suite and ideas like these could help you work to become better in the future.
if you want to try more horror movies go for more scrathy lines and bit better coordination of the charicter.