Rushed Near End!
I saw the progress of this flash and it was going great! Then you rushed the ending! Typical Micsa!
Reviews for "The Spooky Old House PT1"
Could be better
The guy walked funny and the drawings/animations could have been a lot better. Just my 2 cents
Doesn't cut it.
This screams 2nd grader halloween theme essay...
The creepy old house!
Marc was out on Halloween trick or treating. He was walking alone and it was dark. He walked around a corner and saw hundreds of zombies and ghosts and monsters. He didn't like it so he ran into the closest house. Evil eyes looked at him. The house was very dark and he got attacked by ghost.
The end
Written by little Timmy.
Get my point? You're not particular good at drawing nor animating in flash, but you know the basics of both. Therefore you should really focus on training your script writing. Analyse movies you like and note how a story is told. Search the internet for information of story writing and making storyboards and such. Could prove helpful :)
I gave it a zero. I'm sorry but it's just not good in any aspects. I foresee a blam.