Why o' why
Why is this one rated so low ?... It's not totally crazy or anything but the drawing is good, the dialogue fits perfectly in Mario & Bowser's situation !... The only problem i'd see is no colours & i'd say too short but the dialogue probably went in a direction where it wouldnt make any sense to have Mario & Bowser into it.
I enjoyed it and i gave it a 5 to try to place it higher then it is right now. This deserves to be in the 3.50's at least.
I liked it just as i enjoyed your FF1 thing with the Black knight. Good stuff my friend.