Reviews for Instawin

[Coop]

Lacking effort

So I've instantly won a paintbrush? Well, it's on;y a picture, so I wish that I didn't have to go through the indignity of winning something that I'll never actually be able to use.

The lip-sync was absolutely awful, with no regards to where the sound was, so half the time there was no sound and the images of the character is still there, flapping lips, apparently taking to itself.

With the flashing screen at the start, it would be a good idea to tone that down a little, as it's just the visual equivalent of white noise, so toning it down and perhaps adding some sort of harp based fanfare, you would give us a much more enjoyable perception of having won something.

[Review Request Club]

Wegra responds:

I respect your opinion. But please get a sense of humor will ya?

[perfect-insanity]

again?

Visuals: Badly drawn, too simple, I mean come on you've been making lots of submissions, do you not learn anything from them? Or are you just content to have tons of poorly done flashes than a few good ones? Your drawing skills need to be improved

Audio: I actually liked this part of the flash, much better than that speakonia crud, at least you care about one aspect of flashing

Overall: For you this is halfway decent, but you really should try and improve your drawing, and what was he whole thing with the "xylophone"? It wasn't a xylophone it was a paint brush, maybe I'm to dense to pick up on the humour in that

.:Review Request Club:.

Wegra responds:

No shit it's not a xylophone. Grow a sense of humor ya wee lad.

[sirtom93]

Not good.

This was to an epicly poor quality, it was bad to watch and everything seemed rush - from the line pointing at the play button - to the white line at the left of the "you win" text, it was all bad. The voice was obviously... the best bit - but that was all. It wasn't even that funny, having said that it did seem like you had edited the VO a bit to add echo or whatnot, and basically my 3 stars go to the voice over. Try again.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

Wegra responds:

No it wasn't rushed. It's a game where you win what do you expect?

[Haggard]

\m/

The voice was the best part. The "You win a prize!" was just awesome.

Sadly, the rest of the flash didn't live up to those expectations, as it was a bit too slow overall. Also the voice wasn't that good to understand (but better than speakonia ;) ).

The drawings and animations are lame, so you should work on that.

{ Review Request Club }

Wegra responds:

Finally! People understand what I'm trying to say! Tis a new begining for Wegra!

[Bezman]

A brief smile gave way to brief boredom.

I've seen this 'trick' a couple of times before. However, I renjoyed the 'you win a prize' voice and brought a faint smile to my face.

I felt that your gaps - between each 'scene change' should have been eliminated. And the final comment - that you have a voice - doesn't make this particular submission better. The reverse, in fact.

Also, you really need to stop being so lazy. 2-frame animations of a badly-drawn-stickman just aren't that interesting for the eyes. Try making new drawings. Do something that looks good - whether better drawings or more animation.

Wegra responds:

I can't help being lazy. I can never really find a time to practice.