"Voice isn't that great?!"
Nonsense.
I know it probably won't mean much coming from some random nobody but I am VERY picky about songs with vocals in them and what you have is a gift and I loved it! You have a wonderful voice and I particularly liked the harmony that you weaved thoughout the song as well as your pronunciations for the words in the dragon tongue.
The only thing that didn't seem to fit to me was the drums near the end. I think they may have been just a tad too loud or maybe it needed a different type of drum? Not certain.
Regardless, beautiful work and I look forward to hearing more!