thumbs half way up
good job on the graohics but seriously it took you how long to make these and you nly have 3 short videos what were you thinking
Reviews for "Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt2)"
Alright
OK we get it, soomething bad went down. You move too slow, the animation and everything is nice but NOTHING IS HAPPENING. Do something already.
Otherwise it was technically very well put together.
Fallen Angel pt.2
Ok, a movie this short shouldn't send this much time on the story. Infact, because it's just a Flash it should have more action. Adding a story like this to a flash is over complicating things. I've also noticed a recurring theme in the graphics, only 1 object (which would the the one closest to you etc tank, car, helicopter) is in good detail, now I know it's closer or you want to focus on it more you make if mroe detailed, but comparing it to everythign around it, it just doesn't work. The backgrouds look hurried and lazily drawn and you said it took you 4 years to make which is more than enough time to make it look good. Ok, so there's some thigns that went on, a EMP bomb went off, the chick was trying to call her parents and now she hit a tree if a surf board to the back of the skull and of course everyone is wondering what happened to her. Well at this point, I didn't really care, heck you could kill her and have another main character for all I care. Because even though as good as some of these graphcis are, this flash series isn't looking very good.
Explosives don't work like that.
So, what, those were gigantic EMP's warheads that those submarine launched missiles were carrying? That also could take out a cars hydraulic power steering? As well as a helicopters gas powered engine? Really?
Besides that, plot's mildly interesting, artwork is well done.
=((
not again! after it has loaded all I hear is a deep bass and nothing happens.
this is really starting to annoy me!