not really that fun.
for one thing, it takes way too long to load the manu, and when you die there's like a 15 second wait to submit your score or go to the link. i think the load time kind of makes people frustrated when they try to play again. i should know, this was what severely pissed me off. there should be a "retry?' button there and/ or a "retry from last checkpoint?" button (add checkpoints so players can start off from where they died.). another thing- try to make the first levels or so like a tutorial, so players may get the hang of things so they can ACTUALLY enjoy it. the pyramid there was a major bad. i always died there without knowing what to do. and the line energy runs out too fast- i mean what the fuck?!?!??!! you have to hit EVERY SINGLE donut and food item to keep going. why play? your path is pretty much decided for you. make the energy button recharge itself and food items able to make it recharge it faster. it would also be nice if you could have different items, like a different color pencil, (better one would recharge faster, have better handling) and maybe different umbrellas, (that would help you glide faster/smoother/open faster to save yourself-more hang time before falling that sort of thing) and maybe different suits- just for fun. boss battle maybe? -like what gouku88 and Ytaker said. and for the story-maybe he has to get to work? i might be interested in a sequel-but fix these things first. i understand this might be asking much but at least try. thanks.
-shan