kinda cool
kinda cool but i hate that voices dont use that stupid sound revert program
Reviews for "A Carbonwater Halloween"
Funny, and you have potential
I really like the humour in your storyline and your character designs. The use of thick and thin lines and the shading on the characters makes them look very polished. The animation and talking of your characters is a bit of a let down for your nicely drawn characters. You should put some more work into animating your characters actions, and move away from keeping the characters as only one movie clip which has been flipped or bounced around to convey movement. Find some voice actors (there is a huge amount of talent on some amateur voice acting forums) instead of using text to voice software. This will enhance the comedic impact of the funny lines the characters say. Replace the flapping of the mouths with proper lip syncing too. Also, your drawing style of using flat shapes of colour looks very clean, but it lacks detain in scenes where it is close up such as when they open the door of the house. If you included some detail on these shapes your scenes could be very impressive visually.
Fix up the animating and talking and I would be surprised if your future episodes didn't pass 4.00
perfect time killer
enjoyd it! not great but as written, a good time killer
great except for the speakonia sounds.
yea I thought it was pretty good, but I hated the voices in this, if you had voice actors you could have got them to voice the cartoon. oh and you said its much easier to type in text than speak... you couldn't be more 100% wrong! typing takes 2-3x longer, add a few more on for spelling mistakes, whereas speaking into a microphone only takes a few seconds. and if its also cus you dont have a microhone, next time get one, and get some other voice actors.
Anyway I dont wanna be a skapoot! (god knows what that word means, its just funny when luigi says it in the nintendo collab" this was surprisingly funny :) keep it up :P
Carbonwater responds:
For me it takes longer to use real voices. Because the sound card in this computer was gone to hell, so I can't record my voice without this whining noise in the background.
So i've gotta use another computer then transfer the sound file over with my USB and then cut out the lines I want with Audacity and import them into flash.
Overall, it's just a big pain in the arse for me to do.
ok i guess
it was good except its nothing new, the voices suck and if he made it an actual animation with better voices it could have been better, and was it suppose to be funny?