great
This is your second flash and it isn't bad I liked the voice and the animation was pretty good can't wait to see your new flash
Reviews for "The Last Piece of Cake"
Bel effort
Il faudrait que tu fait des Flash Movies plus long, plus complet. Avec un background, plus d'action, plus d'histoire, mais en général c'est bon pour t'es premiers Flash.
Bonne chance, ton humour devrait être un peu plus poussé aussi :)
Continu ton beau travail et je suis sur que ça donnera un bon résultat.
Not so Good
You definitely have potential, but you're not using it well. Firstly, you should at least color in your characters. Your art and animation techniques show promise, and really aren't bad, but they could use a little work. You should also work on your lip-syncing, it's easy to get the hang of. Lastly, I say this to almost every aspiring flash artist, LENGTHEN UP YOUR MOVIES! No one wants to watch a movie that's only forty seconds long, it's a fact. Either way, keep doing what your doing, and keep practicing.
lmao nice
lmao nice man pretty funny keep it up
I know why it's *supposed* to be funny, but...
Ehhhhh... I don't get why he wouldn't notice how bad the cake *tastes* until after he'd finished eating it. Joke just doesn't work for me.