Like you said...
It was VERRY good!
Reviews for "Battle of Stick Figures"
DestroyedPencil responds:
Thanks!
Hmm...
I'll give you a five because when i started out, I stunk waaaay more than they say you did. If You started out like this then I'm sure with a little bit of practice, you might be better than Xefpatterson and his Cliff.
The water and the fire stuff sorta reminded me of Runescape a little. The sounds did anyway. Other than that, you did pretty good. I'll look forward to seeing more of your work.
Im not exactly..good at animation but I know how to do it..it's just that, I shake with my hands so when I use flash, I can't get a steady drawing. Anyhow, if you need help don't be afraid to ask.
DestroyedPencil responds:
Thanks! I might continue on, with the stick figures but, I might not. Thanks for your Review, I found it very helpful.
a review
nice try but just try on giving a good action scene nothing too flashy yet first put some more work into it by having much more movements(a kick isn't just a leg moving up or a body rotating 90 degrees and moving forward) and thinner lines for the stick men and make a larger more detailed background (platforms aren't just a single line a square would be a bit better).all in all put as much work as u can no matter how long it takes .
DestroyedPencil responds:
Thanks, I will try to put more work into the flashes in the future. I am only starting on stick figures and may go onto them but, I might move on to something else. Thanks for Reviewing!
nope.
You WILL need a lot more skill than that, believe me.
DestroyedPencil responds:
I know, but if you read the the author's comment you would know that I am just starting on stick figures.
not too good
it was a little cheesy, and you used the (smack), (blue fireball thingy hitting something), and (block, floor, etc. being destroyed) sound effects a little too much. in other words, it got repetitive.
DestroyedPencil responds:
Thanks, I knew that I used the sound effects too much but, I had to make it a little bit longer. Thank you for reviewing!