Interesting
It actually wasnt that bad. I enjoyed listening to the background music lol. I feel like i'm missing a part of the story though and i'd like to see more of it. Good Job
Reviews for "Seeds(1)"
Very good flash.
This is a great flash with nice animation. It is a nice story and sad when the robot dies at the end. Still very great flash good job to you sir. The only thing I can recommend is your opening intro should be fixed. The edges of the gears still have a square outline which can be erased and made better.
7/10
3/5
~LobsterSauce
Mesmay responds:
Thanks... although I couldnt've actually done that.
The reason why-
-Basically, I used a type of line tool, edited it to go "squiggly", and then drew the shape.
Thus it looks like it is a smooth non-square shape, but it is actually drawn as 3 rigid perpendicular lines.. And so if I had tried the erase the grey parts out, then it wouldve affected the line also.
Although well done for picking it up, i guess =3
Hmm.
I really liked this one, it had a deeper feeling behind it. Something more then "must remove inefficient form".
Though, I sorta felt there should be more. Im not sure what though, but there was a slight feeling that sometign where missing.
Even so, I still like it, and you deserve a decent grade.
Good going. ^^
It was good
Great animation - the dialogue wasn't brilliant though and the concept wasn't very original either
Good
I liked it. Well done on animation, and the story... I don't think I got it, but great movie average^^ Keep up the good work