Sp much plagerism
This story series is just another one of those "fuse 'em-up with another" series. You put Naruto and Mario. This is basically what happend at the chunnin exams except u changed a little stuff. But what I recomend is that you don't copy of Naruto as much because u've got skills, its just ur story line and plot is unoriginal. And please please PLEASE, don't make a Forest of Death or whatever u name it part because that will just be total plagersim, which is sucky. Jope my advice will change ur series around a little bit.