nice
you clearly worked hard on this and even though it was sprites was long,incorperated a gripping plotline,and it also had action so i give a 2 for quality 2 for effort 2 for plotline 2 for audio and 2 for running smoothly that is a ten.
Reviews for "Super Mario bros Z ep.7 (old series)"
Alright
It's nice to see you haven't lost grip of the whole scenario after 16 months or so.
And it definatly IS time to get Bowser involved, isn't it?
In one word: Annoying.
Well its not really bad, but I would honestly not call it worth its hype. I think the word that best describes it is LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG.
Not just long, mind-numbingly long. Its like a fan-fiction gone wrong. Its like receiving brain surgery without anesthetic. I must say, to be able to cram all that pointless dialogue into a movie, and still classify it as action, is truly not what I would call it.
In fact I am sort of new to the SMBZ series. I steer clear of sprite movies, and they can suck or rock however much they want. Well I decided to step out of my comfort zone, and watch this movie. Well I must say, it was not terribly bad, but it was terribly boring.
I can see that you put some hard work into this (or I hope), considering how agonizingly drawn out the dialogue is.
But enough of the dialogue, I could go on for ages about how annoying the dialogue was, but on to the action. I am usually critical of sprite fights, because most often the author did not make the sprites, did not come up with the characters, did not make the backgrounds, etc. Well I cannot really make those assumptions. There are a few instances that looked like origional material. Although the 3d pipe was not what I call top notch animation, it was a nice touch of variety.
But lets get on to the use of sprites. Now I've already given part of this rant, but let me expand on it for you. The main reason being, all the reviews I have seen you make are for sprite movies. In addition, all of your movies are heavily related to video games. Now let me as you, is an origional concept really that hard? If you are such a great artist, as I'm told by the several reviewers already here, and hundreds more bound to come, can't you draw your own material throughout the movie? I mean, I cannot force you to move past video games, but can you at least put the effort that EgoRaptor does?
Which leads me to the humor. Now personally, I tried to read the dialogue, I honestly did, but it was just to painful. I couldn't bear to sit through it. But I did manage to catch a few snatches of it. Let me be the first on Newgrounds to say that 4chan jokes are not funny. They are used and recycled by people with none of their own sense of humor. There may be some of your fan base that loves this humor, hopefully they are not on NG, but using them just feels like a cheap ploy for laughs.
Let me move on to the plot. Actually, because I refuse to watch the rest of the SMBZ series, especially after this, I am not rightfully in a position to make a concise judgement, but may I say, What The Hell??? This brings me back to the description of it as a fan-fiction. All the video game characters together, thrown in with cameos, is this some ploy or am I missing out on something?
How about the sound. Well, while rapidly skipping through dialogue, waiting for something to happen, was annoying enough, It seemed you threw in random sound-effects too. Occasionally having my ears peirced with fake dialogue, hearing the same sound effect several times, was just plain sadistic on your part.
Now that we have gotten through the bulk of the content in this movie, let me move on to the action. The good part, the supposed meat of the movie. I must say, it wasn't to bad, but of course I could have watched an episode of Dragon Ball Z with more action. And then the characters would be drawn by hand. I guess thats the premise of the series: "Mario meets DragonBall Z". Yet instead of taking the good parts of the series and minimalizing the bad, you took the bad parts and minmalized the good. Bad parts: Overly long dialogue and common anime themes (See "How to succeed on Newgrounds" for what I mean). Good parts: fast paced action, interesting character design, and creative plots (to an extent of course).
In summary, it wasn't bad but there was plenty of steps you could have taken to make it better. Like take an axe to the majority of the dialogue, increase the amount of origional artwork, and find a more creative theme.
Another Winner
I'm not going to say this is my favorite episode. The action was a little lacking and it was a bit heavy on the text. Regardless, saying this isn't equivalent to your other work is, by no means, an insult. If anything, it means that your less impressive work is still excellent. As I said, the text walls are a bit too extensive, and there was FAR less plot concentration in them. However, I did find the part of breaking the fourth wall (when you pointed out that the OVER 9000!!! joke was already used) hilarious. The plot twist of inability was a great idea, and Luigi was priceless in this episode, as was Yoshi. I was hoping for more of a role for Raskin and pthouse, but that was my own fault. Their addition was a bit generic, but still packed a punch. All in all, it's still an awesome episode, but the lengthy text could have been put to better use than a history lesson (or animating that section into a scene). Maybe that history lesson will be put to better use later on, but it just seems... Weird in this story. That still won't stop me from watching, though. I hope there will be a Super Mario Bros G/T
And to fanboys: Don't call my review useless just because I didn't give it a perfect score
Like a Cat Shadow
f#cking awesome! Everything is great, the only things that might need some improving.
- The talks about the war etc, history, ..i just skipped through em:p, but the dailogues are interesting very funny,keep em coming:)
- The ending , should have audio..maybe you can speak or someone else, but like dbz it needs that corny voice to end the masterpiece:p
besides this, nothing bad..nothing,just awesome
thankyou for a such great episode, i give it a 10/10