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Reviews for "In my mind"

trippy

TRIPPYY!!

Nice !

Very good effort man, I really enjoyed it. It kept me viewing until the end what means that it was catchy and well done :P.

A good job you did with the graphics, some parts were very nice. Though the drawing quality changes during the flash, I think it was expected and actually it's not bad at all. Through these changes we can clearly notice the differents dreams, so good job. The colors were nice. I liked, when at the begining, it switchs from black and white to colorful, it surprised me in the good way ; ).

The animation was smooth during most of the flash, but sometimes I got less soft and smooth but once again it's not a real problem. And the animation owes its awesomeness to the synchronization with the music. You did a great job with it, in my opinion it's the best part side of the flash.

I can really comment the story because a Dream isn't expected to follow any rules, this flash just shows the large kindom of the Dream, you really catched this feeling, I was like in a dream ....

The music was well chosen and fited in nicely with the animation, as I said above, great job. Nothing esle to say =D.

Overall, very good production that seems clean and well finished. Oh I forgot a detail, really enjoyed the Menu: it was pretty simple and empty but I enjoyed it. This dark screen made me think of the moment when you are almost sleeping but not entierly, so yeah, good thing.

*Review Request Club*

Lochie responds:

Thank you, I was trying to change styles throughout the flash, I just wanted to show my different techniques, I didn't get all of them in though.

SINXING TO MUSIC IS COOL.

It was supposed to be a dream-like experience, I am glad that you realised that. :)

I am glad that you understood pretty much everything that was intended, thank you for the great review.

Nice, but random

Certainly an interesting piece, with some cross-discipline style of animation. The frame by frame was well made, but is certainly not the best part of the piece. I like the scene setting and the way that you drew it.

With the well drawn parts, you need to concentrate on those a bit more, but it's at least something to work towards. I think that it shows your quality as an animator and I would love to see you develop this sort of thing to a full flash or even a series.

[Review Request Club]

Lochie responds:

A series, I never thought of doing that, I might now actually.

I will work towards drawing more detailed pictures from now on, thank you.

awesome

Visuals: well drawn, random, not of the best quality but it doesn't take away from the movie, they went in perfect sync with the music and had that "artistic statement" feel about them

Audio: great song for this type of animation, it went with the whole randomness theme nicely

Overall: cool animation the menu took a bit to start up, might consider changing that, also continue to develop your animation skills, they're good now and can always be better

.:Review Request Club:.

Lochie responds:

Thank you for the encurougement(sp?).

Nice and short review, love it.
I am very pleased that you liked the random aspect of the flash.

Thanks for the review.

Cool

Nice experimental flash

A very cool looking movie, nice use of different styles and very well synched with music. Really worked well.

The music was a cool choice. Fitted in excellently to the visual aspect of the film

Overall it was excellent,trippy and all round fun. I was a bit disappointed at the end when you couldn't go back to the menu. But that's only a little thing. Good movie, good job

=Review Request Club=

Lochie responds:

I didn't think anybody would need to go back to the menu, because it took a while to appear and such.

Thank you for the 9 and nice review. I appreciate the things you have said and I will take them into consideration next time I make another music-video-type-thingy.. yeah. :D