I don't think so
I am pretty sure that this is not the DOMOFlashVideos I usually think of. While I did like it how this managed to have some music, it still did not work out well because so little happened. I was expecting this to be like Tom Fulp porn or something. I am quite glad it was something different. The thing you guys need to work with is creating a background and having the characters move and not just have them being represented in square boxes. You should try to remove the box outline.
The good part was that it was kind of unpredictable. I did not see Jerry coming there from a mile away, but it was not that entertaining. It was hard to read at times. I thought for a moment there it said, "Tom Fulp with a foe" and not "Tom Fulp with a fox". Well, I suppose it would not matter if he considered a fox an actual foe.