meh
it was ok. u copied a lot of it from SUper mario Bros Z. there wasnt enough music and the fighting scenes were kind of slow. U hafta make them fast paced. Like in smbz and MY flash movies.
Reviews for "SSC: ep 1"
sonicmcbob responds:
i saw ur vids mine is way faster
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Good job?
The answer is no.
Decent flash animation. Take a page from Alvin-Earthworm's book tho.
Not bad, but not good.
I hope the others are better.
Lacking in several areas..
It's a great start, but u need to put more time and effort into this flash. Your lacking the following:
A creative flow of music...
A strong story line...u have one started, but u lack any true depth.
A variety of other sounds and effects...like ocean wave noises or other background sounds...
If you can improve on these areas, then i believe you might develope a much better flash movie. People crave action and even bits of humor and drama within the story, so try to add some of that as well in your future flashes.
Again, it's a fine starter movie, but you have alot to improve on. Hope to see the improvements! :)
Yea right
Ok you have to work on the timeing of the sound affects and you have to work on filling in some of the silent moments with sound. Narrate if you'd like to, its ok. But NO WAY IN HELL WOULD SONIC BEAT MARIO LIKE THAT. MARIO WOULD HAVE PW3ND SONIC WHEN HE WAS RUNNING AROUND LIKE THAT. 5 stars thats final
sonicmcbob responds:
it was just for the trial thing. mario will get his chance, trust me
was ok....
it was ok but your mecha sonic kamehameha poses looked a bit off and you didnt even rip your master hand sprite properly