very funny
i actually wonder wat would happen and how much pwnage there would be if jebus and hank teams up
Reviews for "Madness Reprobabilitation"
RazorShader responds:
I think it would be absolutely awesome :D
moral:dont make fun of clowns
lol i will make fun of clowns
RazorShader responds:
That's the spirit! But be prepared to face the consequences....
just awsome
man having seen the madness series many times i can reassure u this was fuckin awsome i mean i laughed some hard at this one !!! keep it up
RazorShader responds:
Thanks a lot, glad it made you laugh :)
Roflmao!
"The clown cannot die."
"And cannot sing"
"And cannot dance"
LOL!!! Keep it up man. If you continue like this. your madness submissions will be better and better. I hope to see more!
RazorShader responds:
Thanks ;D
I'm not sure if you haven't seen it so far, but for this year I've made another one with some of the same characters; "Revival & Revenge". Be sure to check it out ;)
Impressivelly Done on Power Point
First off. I'll state that you done a good job all creditted to creativity on Power Point.
I commend you on remixing featured scenes from Krinkels animations in syncing with your concept of a Madness Tribute.
The art of the charecters was very neat. I like the design of Jake Tulper with his horrific look. You done a good job drawing the charecters from Krinkel's seris. The Backgrounds were neatlly drawn for most scenes.
The Animation of this cartoon was overall well motioned and action packed, but more work needs to be put in for movements, as following...
The Introduction scene was well reminded of the very first Madness Combat episode. Mortal Jake's death needs more work added with the force of bullets him, brutally. A more masked trembled death could have been add, with bounce his corpse collapsing.
The Introdution of Jake Rebirth was well presented with him shooting the two agents.
The Boat scene is what brings my rating to its downfall. The Speed Boat was well drawn. What could have made it better would be when Jake jumped onboard the boat, there have been an animated splash to represent him land on the vechile. Also when the boat was in motion there should have been added a trailing splash of water coming from the back engine to suggest the speed of the boat. Lastly the Colour scheme of the sea and sky was very matching, a top priority of art is that when drawing/painting/animating water is that water is a reflective substance that should image its surrounding enviroment. I would have suggested at least a dark gray colour with added graident for the sea waters.
The Action was well animated at most parts. The prospective point of view of Jake shooting the agent gents with the berretta was well animated but the deaths of the agents need a more masked motion added.
The Scene when Jebus stabed Tricky,y remained stiff without showing any sign of pain, and more smoothness is needed for Jebus sword stabing movements.
The very same scene when Jake had the Sherrif killed was well stylish with the matrix bullet time refference, but the fps should have reduced speed with sounds being more deepened.
The Train- Car chase scene was well thought out, but the motion of both vechiles made the vechiles appeared very stiff, with the carri of vechiles not slightly bouncing up and down on the wheels like a Chevy 64 Impala.
And when the second train landed on the lower cliff, and bounced, it looked very unrealistic. In reality it would have either exploded or slided along the surface trailing sparks with its mechanical parts getting torn apart in destruction.
But it was well referenced of Madness Antipathy.
The Deaths of the agents in a later scene was too easly collapsed without the agents putting up more of a fight and remained very still, That scene is in need of more smoothness of animation, also with addition of masked deaths with the brutality of bullets.
I also commend you on the MAG AGENT V2. scene with the clever ness of murder, but the animation of that scene should have footage of Jebus struggling with strength to use the telegonises power of the heavy Helmet mask thing. The magic powers of Jake and Jebus needs more emotion of rage added to demonstrate the strength and fury of power, like wizards out on a battlefield.
The Final Fight Scene passed away very quicklly. Every Finale Battle in between a Protagenist and Angonist should feature long lasting dramaic, thrilling, brutal, aggressive, action, to finish a plot nicely.
Over all I thought this animation is very good but you need to improve more on smoothness of animation and emotions of charecters.
But keep the good work up :)
lol at the featured Nelson Munts catchphrase:P
RazorShader responds:
Wow. Huge review. But I read it completely ;)
I agree with you about what you say about the suffering of the victims. They are dead immediately or don't seem to bother too much about getting hit or stabbed.
Also the bouncing train is indeed something that looks pretty odd, to me as well, but I just animated it and didn't took the time to improve it.
And you're also right about what you say about Jebus and the big Agent and the final fighting scene.
The problem I faced was a lack of time when I created it... :P
About a week before MD08 I noted that there actually was a madnessday and I spent all my available time on animating this, but it just wasn't enough to make everything turn out great.
Also I was expecting to have a much longer scene at the end, but I made the part from Jakes fight with Mag Agent V1 until the end the day before
I actually skipped school to convert the whole ppt to Flash at MadnessDay, because the first two conversions had some major glitch issues. Just to indicate my lack of time, which looks like a lack of effort.
BUT... This year's submission of mine will probably be a little shorter, but expect it to be better animated.
And thanks for this review; it's probably the best I've had so far.