A good start
This represents a decent start. The movie itself is too short, the speech and animation are jerky, and I didn't really know (or care) who the characters were or why they were dying. But the backgrounds were good, and you get an automatic set of points simply for doing something in the Zombie genre.
ok thanx. im trying to make each part of the story better than the last. this turned into an 8.6 mb flash so i really think i have to improve. if u can, pm me on ways to improve.
would be a lot better if..
you included music. some crappy video game bg music. everything is better with sound.
dont worry, i will, soon
...Oh god.
This is the worst thing I have ever seen. I really hope there is no more.
First off sprite flash is a dead art it was funny when that was the outer limits of what people could do. Now you can fully animate your own drawings, yes its hard but if you have an idea thats actually worth your time then its worth it. Now for being a sprite flash it was HORRIBLY animated learn to tween this whole thing where they teleport around doesn't fly. Voices instead of this ten minute freeze frame conversation is a must. Just no man. not cool.
ok heres the thing dude, this is the best i could have done for a while because of the fact that i had to continually change what was going to happen cause the original story was a peice of shit. sound will come including voices from my brother and myself.