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Reviews for "MOAPAC - Episode 1"

Kitsch!

Means bad artistic choice of comedy. I am not a fop when it comes to animation as long as it has pleasant color palette, non- stick figure, non screamer's, non- ass clown seizure festival circa 1977.

I understand it's a new series, lad lay da. But ergo for it to a success it got to be different. I saw you were trying to have random humour, stereotype humour.
But you come off being naif. Some of best humour happens when it is unexpected + when give social proof to someone. social proof is near impossible for you.

Here is ome possible improvements on humours, have only one character break the fourth wall talk straight to audience has to be unexpected look straight, freeze frame stuff like that. If you can do impersonations try using it as impersonations as famous people as narrator. my friend is magnificent with impersonations, his best are morgan freeman, Christopher walkin. You can say in a clip before you start narrating,"narrating will be done my Morgan freeman or whoever. If you want more possible idea just PM.

But whatever hopeful you keep working on quality before quantity.

RhysMus responds:

i dont want any of your ideas :S there silly :)

This

is not that funny, the animation isnt that good, and the flavor seems off. its quite a long piece, but in the end it feels like a ghettofied rip off of tomorrows nobodies with bad spelling.

RhysMus responds:

well of course you cant win them all :D

that was perty good

wasent that funny but good flash eny way

RhysMus responds:

but a 5? Didn't deserve more?

huh....

Ok it was good animation...

But I never laughed. Not even once.

RhysMus responds:

well you my friend have no sence of humor :D

I give you a 5 for animation.

Other than that the character were tottaly predictable and boring. I liked the animation but thats all I give it for.

RhysMus responds:

fair nuff!