Not bad
The quality wasn't great, but it had a certain "feel" to it. also, lip syncing was horrible =/. But I'm sure that you have improved overtime. I guess you win some, and you lose some
4/5
Not bad
The quality wasn't great, but it had a certain "feel" to it. also, lip syncing was horrible =/. But I'm sure that you have improved overtime. I guess you win some, and you lose some
4/5
yeah the syncing sucks
when i made this this was awesome, but new it sucks
It's for the effort I suppose.
Well, I gave you a three just because there are a bunch or problems I have with this. The animation definately needs work, it's very choppy and doesn't flow very well. Also, the graphics are lacking in details. As Zeix said a few characters were definately missing eyes and there were just the basics laid out. Like the scene when it's outside the brown house. All you get is the grade-school blue to green gradient with a sloppily structured and shaded house. At least I could make out what most of the things were supposed to be, trust me I've seen worse. Another thing that irked me a bit, being a sound guy, you managed to take TomaMoto's voice acting track and slaughter the quality. TomaMoto had a far superior sound to his. I'm not sure if you compressed it or changed the format or something, but that brough down the voting a bit too. Hey, it's not horrible; it just needs some improvements. Work harder, put a bit more time into your flashes and really find something in it that will make you proud. Draw a lot to understand proportion and modeling. Learn some more shading techniques and some color blending. If it's something you're sharing with a community and with other people you should really put a lot of effort into something and show off what you really can do! Keep trying, you can only get better! ^_^
~Dylan ^_^
its not a long time ago i made this. but I em much better new
Wow, uh...
Your animating isn't TOO bad, but...
Most of them were missing their fucking eyes.
So, definitely lose points from that negligence.
forget the fucking eyes
old lady giving the finger lol.
yes point taken - its 'just crazy'. You did spend a significant amount of time on this obviously and I always reward effort. Also you have good animating skills.
thanks and i made the movie in like 4 day
Heh.
Nice use to TomaMotos demo, But i know you can do better then that.
But otherwise, it was well thought out
thanks man