Nice
(This review is for the full version on your site)
I am interested in this series. It is a real series as opposed to several independent stories with the same characters.
I also like the idea of actually having a plot - you're doing a good job in this area.
Of course, I must comment about the art/animation: it is excellent.
Like the last reviewer said: that scene when Arrogancy came to the room with clothes was truly in the tradition of real mangas. It's also the reason I gave you a "5" for humor in this otherwise "serious" movie.
My only real complaints have to do with sound and action.
The voice of Commander Jacobs does not fit the character at all. I'm assuming that you are doing his voice (I could be wrong), but maybe you should have someone else do it.
And my second "complaint" (if you could call it that) has to do with the action in the movie. The fight sequence, though pretty well done, seemed to move a little slow. You should make your cuts a little faster, or something.
Also, you could DEFINITELY use some better sound effects when people get punched and kicked. Right now, even full blown head smashes sound like flyswats. It just doesn't do justice to the painful-looking animations.
Other than that, great job! I am really looking forward to Chapter 4.