I saw the "full version"
The full version is better than the rest of the movies 'cause you had some what of better reactions in the voices not like someone reading some script
Reviews for "Arrogancy: Chapter 3 (SV)"
Tis is good,but there needs to be voices
Once again keep up the good job and i can't wait to see ep.4
Good drawing, but it needs to be more emotive.
First off, the drawing was great. It reminded me of Exploitation Now. The backgrounds worked (thanks to the often monochromatic nature) surprisingly well, and I noticed many little details that emphasized the amount of work you put into this episode. However, there's some stuff you could work on:
1)The voice acting is pretty passive. It's not bad, it just doesn't always fit the action. Same with the music. Also, you could speed up the pace by removing instances where a charcter speaks, and replacing it with a quick look that communicates the needed information.
2)The fight scenes were not exactly top notch. While it would be -for me at least- insanely difficult to make the characters more fluid and still retain the high quality of the art, there must be some way. Maybe make it really fast so you don't notice if the art's less detailed. It just wasn't convincing.
3)Storyline. While the storyline's fine, it's pretty tired. You need: a) more action, or b) engaging characters. You seem to be going for b, and that's the better choice in my opinion. But to do that, you need more mystery, ie, not so much background info. Keep us engaged and guessing. Also, if you're going for b, just ignore me; tht stuff takes time.
I feel bad bitching about something far and away better than I could do, but there you go. I hope it was constructive. Overall, I'm impressed.
Come on!
It's to slow. To slow. To sloooooooooooooow!
It was great anyway.
Definately needs the voice acting..
Despite what I said on part two, it doesn't have the same effect without voice acting. Arrogancy- you need to throw in some more sounds for your fight scenes...that one hollow "clink" noise is like in every fight scene...and in some of your SMBX...