Reviews for Arrogancy: Chapter 3 (SV)

[Onyxenith]

What the hell was that other guy talking about?

Holy smokes. When you hear things like what that last guy said about this series being poorly put together without a lot of thought being put into it. What the hell? This was obviously well planned out, well put together, and the storyline is very involving.
A couple of things to be improved upon: The text is not absolutely perfect with the actual dialogue. That can be fixed by just going over the sound and listening to it and retyping out the actual dialogue. Even still, it doesn't really matter to the plot of the movie.
You lose some points for the pictures as backgrounds, especially the house because it pixelated and generally looked bad. I loved the whole PAC meeting room thing with the freeze frame images of the ripper and of arrogancy. That was awesome. I love the style, and the animation has its benefits, too. I would rather see a hell of a lot of really cool action pictures than some poorly drawn animation of those same action sequences. The only way to top what you have would be to combine the pluses of both sides so that its very well drawn pictures that go through the whole range of motion, but the style suits what we are seeing now.
If you do choose to make the anime movie version of this, then the last thing is mandatory, but for a simple flash series its not necessary totally, and I like how things are being done.
Keep up the good work.

[SquidBonk]

I'm not watching anymore.

Ok,I just viewed all three in succession. I'm sorry man, it really does seem like you tried but perhaps if you think about animating as if you were drawing on paper rather than tweening with flash, you'd have more success. You had more animation that was decent such as some of the kicks but the thing that got me was the elbow hitting the guy to the ground, his arm jerked down as if to pull some rope and you have a pool table sound effect. 'Bad guy in the corner pocket.' You should write your scripts before you do the art. It may be hard to believe but planning beforehand and organizing everything, such as layout is actually important. When it comes to a series animation that's supposed to have a story, it's absolutely crucial. I don't mean have your whole series planned out, I just mean do the planning before you do the art, don't make the script fit the animation. Watch cartoons (anime or not) and look at reactions and timing. Look in a mirror and say lines from your script and think what would you (if you had the characters personality) look like if you were saying some of those things. Showing Arrogancy around may be good for getting a graphics/web design job but as far as animation, don't count on it.

[Nameinthesnow]

Very impressive.

I must say, I think you do excellent work. The fight scene was well done and smooth. The artwork was splendid and I love the look of the characters. The Retreivers were awesome. I honestly think yours is some of the best flash I've ever seen. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. Piece.

[Masterofpuppets]

gettin worse

this one doesent even have voices.......i think this series is slowly goin down......but....i liked the fightin scene....its ok but still...iz gettin worse

[IndecentXposure]

this was ok...

the graphics are good in all three but like the first one the sound wasnt that great. good effort. good series overall.