Reviews for Smiley -Battle for Smokes

[notorious]

Yes, indeed, this IS his first flash.

which is made blatantly obvious by the rigid movements, sloppy characters, rough lines, poor character design and plot, and bad high pitched voices. Guys, get over it, it's just his first flash.

I was going to write about how you can improve your animation skills in general etc. but then i reread your authors comments and realized that you are now well past your first flash cartoon. Spongebob sickpants was great, can't really review this and tell you to improve since this was something you did a long time ago so uhmmmm just keep makin better stuff i guess!!!

[snakebite435]

i thought it wasnt that good

no police force would take that many casulties for a pack of smokes.

[pineconjoe]

just one thing.....

BULLETS DO NOT WORK THAT WAY!

[hrechkaness]

omg that was a gauntlet to sit through

despite some actual things i like from this flash i could barely sit throught the whole thing. Number one thing that bothered me was the endless SIDE SCROLLING SCENES with smiley running...... use a little more imagination for action sequences or different angles and all that what not. Another trend these days is apparently putting no effort in artwork and focusing solely on animation. I'm sorry but circles and blocks moving at fast pace speed just doesn't cut it for me. This was also really really random, not the funny random, more like ....wtf?random. I guess the reason why I was able to sit through the whole thing was because I really liked the song. Half the time i wasn't even paying attention really to the repetative stuff that was going on. Work on those problems and I'm sure you'll come up with a popular hit in the future.

[TheRoot]

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sorry but that was neither creative nor good animated