hahaha
lol wth when do policemen have tanks and nuclear missiles
Reviews for "Smiley -Battle for Smokes"
eh..
not bad for your first but...plot kinda sucked...only part i liked is where he threw the smokes at the clerks face...kinda lost me after that
lmao
he like a cockroach. no matter how much u step on it....jus doesnt seem to die lol i dnt have to tell u that ur drawin skills need brushing up but i found this very entertainin. keep it up. id like to see more. peace.
try harder next time big guy
i had to be fair and give you a 2 for the animation and time you spent. but wow was that a piece of crap. it was insult to the awesome music you had on it. plot was lame work on your flash and get a writer or story i dont know why the fuck all these people are giving you such a high score but damn.
and after all that his cigarettes are wet not to mention he doesnt have a lighter or matches and im sure theres none left in the city
Oney responds:
I'm not big :(
Yes, indeed, this IS his first flash.
which is made blatantly obvious by the rigid movements, sloppy characters, rough lines, poor character design and plot, and bad high pitched voices. Guys, get over it, it's just his first flash.
I was going to write about how you can improve your animation skills in general etc. but then i reread your authors comments and realized that you are now well past your first flash cartoon. Spongebob sickpants was great, can't really review this and tell you to improve since this was something you did a long time ago so uhmmmm just keep makin better stuff i guess!!!