Thank You.
Thank you for making this flash. Everything was well-organized. The audio was appropriate. Also, I like the slideshow style animation, it lets me read at my own pace. Make some more guides like this, or put them together in a collection. "Guide for Newground Noobies" You have my right to take the title, haha.
Thanks for insiring me to make more!
OMFG U ARE BLAM BA1T! (Kidding)
Seriously, it's good that you created such a tutorial. There are a lot of idiots out there who don't know anything about writing reviews. This has even improved my own writing... Let me try what I learned here.
Audio - Pretty nice techno song (You couldn't use mine?) that seems to fit in with the NG atmosphere. You didn't just use the "Endless Handbag Loop" that I see so often in this type of tutorial
Animation - None here. A transition between pages would be nice, for instance having the entire page move left instead of just going there.
Graphics - Good. Your screenshot quality could be better. Also, nice use of the TF2 font.
Overall - Very good! I would like to see some other flashes explaining some other things you would like to see people do better on. Thank you and have a happy Spore Day.
A very nice, informative flash.
I liked this submission a lot. It didn't teach me a lot that I didn't know, but I know that if all the users who write low quality reviews read and follow this flash, the flash portal would be a better place and contain less abuse. Well done for that.
Now, onto the review:
Animation:Not rated:
Not much animation. It's a guide so it's ok for little animation.
Sound:9/10:
A good, high quality, backing track that added to the submission. In many guides and tutorials the audio is distracting, but this suits the submission well. Well picked.
Art:8/10:
Nice fonts, decent background colouring and screenshots (if screenshots are counted as art), Well done.
Humour:Not rated:
Not enough humour to rate.
Presentation8/10:
I liked the way this was presented. The presentation helped out the overall quality.
Preloader:Not rated:
A good preloader, but I only give scores if the preloader was created by the artist. This is the standard NG preloader.
Style:Not rated:
Not rated.
Violence:Not rated:
Not rated.
V-Camming:9/10:
No vCam (or none that I could see) used.
Execution:10/10:
Informative and helpful. How every guide should be. Well done.
Overall:9/10:
Great overall. All the parts come together and form a great flash. A few improvements could be added (maybe a test after the guide) even small improvements can make a big difference. I wish you both luck in future submissions.
good job on the flash game thing.
that was very good. one suggestion though if you will take it. it was a little bit short and not that many people will listen if i interpret newgrounds correctly. i would make this flash a little more interesting. otherwise it was very good and enjoyable.
one last thing would be to add more music and make it less, well, abnoxious. its kind of hard to read with the music blasting in your ears. (volume thouhg should handle that.
5/5 9/10
very nice
I would do everything you said to do in your flash..but I would kinda feel like an idiot lol.
But really, I liked how you actually went in deph in describing how to write a review correctly. Hopefully it'll help teach people what to do when makiing coments, and in the end help improve flash games/movies that have a lot of potential.