with a little practice you could end up making #1.
I guess the graphics were ok but thats about all I can give it, This is extreme amateur work... (well I guess it's ok if your an "Extreme Amateur") but... This doesn't belong on newgrounds (Just yet) but from the looks of the design, I'm guessing in maybe a year or two, your stuff could end up being pretty good! Don't listen to the people who say "NEVER MAKE A FLASH AGAIN!" please keep working on it, I want to see future works, but this game just doesn't cut it... sorry. (Voted 0 because I just don't want this on newgrounds... not quite good enough, otherwise I would probably rate it 1-10:
Graphics: 7
Gameplay: 3
Style: 8
Overall: 3.5