needs improvement
Here's what I didn't like about it:
The flash moved incredibly slow the whole time. Also, Luigi randomly disappears and then reappears. Also, a good majority of the movie was just pauses where nothing was happening. I couldn't tell what was happening really.
All in all, it just seemed long and drug out. Try maybe a higher FPS and try to avoid those pauses where the sprites are just sitting there. Best of luck to you.