Very good.
A couple ideas: Fix the font, it's so basic; make the people a bit bigger, or the screen smaller; maybe some sounds would be good as well. :D Not bad for your first.
Reviews for "My very First Flash"
Ichi-Kats26 responds:
thx man...and thx for the tips
Wow
I think "kwing" was trying to say that this is too good to be a first flash. I had the same thought myself.
This is very well made. Maybe you should scale in and make your stage a little smaller so it's more engaging. Other than that and lack of sound, it was really really good. Keep it up!
Ichi-Kats26 responds:
dude i SWEAR it was my first flash lol...i frickin made it with the demo...but thx anywayz
Wow man it was da best 1st flash
It was the best 1st flash that a guy could ever made man every detail was good
*The small dust detail of the ground was awesome
*The animation was smooth
*The black thing covering the screen was bad it coul've just been a normal rectangle with alpha effects
*Sometimes the sticks kind looked corny
It was great
4/5 7/10
Thumbs up.
Sure as hell better than my first...
Damn, the animation is all smooth and silky and shit. I like it.
Script a camera,,,
and then it'll be 90x better b/c you can tell you put alot of hard work in the animation. it seems like a waste to be watching it from so far away